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Nathan Slake's avatar

Fantastic chapter, Kate. Love the mystery and build-up and little secrets and facts divulged. There's also some great internal reflection by Marie going on here.

A few favourites here:

"Constantly alert, I began to willingly poison myself with adrenaline that became a perpetual drip, at once keeping me very, very alive and also moving me toward the stony existence that was coming."

Really like this and how it goes with the Medusa of the city.

"And now I feel I was just a tool, with little to offer society, because I even failed at saving this piece of art for you to put in the right hands." -- quite heartbreaking.

"Of course, I wouldn’t see her soon, because soon the virus would come to us and we would all be kept in our little crypts." -- and again, but this works in isolation as fiction as a foreboding line and also because we, having lived through it, know exactly what it meant in reality too.

Silvio Castelletti's avatar

This chapter had me glued to the screen from start to finish. Not that the others didn't -- I really enjoyed them all -- but in this one, the layer of mystery is palpable, and you sense that what's to come could be key. Particularly in transitions like this one: "She looked at the dark wall for several seconds in silence, then remembered I was there and turned with a new sparkle in her eye to look at me with what felt like faith." This is getting more interesting by the minute, Kate. Loved it!

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