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David Roberts's avatar

I love a well written party scene. The dance between guest and hostess, the tour, the impressions of the guest. Smart technique to have the dialogue take place in the kitchen so we the readers can focus on the speakers.

Juxtaposition between the beautiful painted trompe l'oeils, with the hint of malice. Multiple layers!

Nicolas Sutro's avatar

Hey Kate, I’m really into Marie’s quality of unease, her sense of threat, her antennae so tuned to things that are kind of off (I love the light being turned on…).

So, the other thing that I really felt in this chapter was the interior. I mean partly because of the work you put in to describe Julie’s work, but I think more because I was Marie moving through it. Everything turns on her, it’s all through her eyes…her, as I said, antennae.

And now there’s Josef in her life. Now…his exit: shit, Kate, that’s cool. And, again, it’s all Marie!

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